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Ballad of a Mother's Heart

The love of parents for their children is a strong trait among Filipinos, and, as is true in the Orient, generally the son is particularly dear to his mother. The poem which follows relates how forgiving and how great the love of a mother is for her son although he has hurt her very much.

The night was dark, for the moon was young

And the stars were asleep and rare;

The clouds were thick, yet Youth went out

To see his Maiden fair.

 

'Dear One,' he pleaded as he knelt

Before her feet, in tears,

'My love is true; why have you kept

Me waiting all these years?'

 

The maiden looked at him unmoved,

It seemed, and whispered low:

'Persistent Youth, you have to prove

By deeds your love is true.'

 

'There's not a thing I would not do

For you, Beloved,' said he.

'Then go,' said she, 'to your mother dears

And bring her heart to me.'

 

Without another word, Youth left

And went to his mother dear,

And opened her breast and took her heart.

He did not shed a tear!

 

Then back to his Maiden fair he ran,

Unmindful of the rain;

Bus his feet slipped and down he fell

And load he groaned with pain.

 

Still in his hand he held the prize

That would win his Maiden's hand;

And he thought of his mother dear

So kind, so sweet, so fond.

 

And then he heard a voice, not from

His lips but all apart:

'Get up,' it said; 'were you hurt, Child?'

It was his mother's heart.

 


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Scaramouche Comment by: Scaramouche - 2008-07-10 17:06
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I read this poem in college in the 70's and this is the way this poem goes.

There was a Young Man who loved a Maid,
Who taunted him, "Are you afraid" she asked,
To bring to me today your Mother's Heart upon a tray".

He went a slew his Mother dead...
Tore from her breast her heart so red.
Then toward his ladylove he raced..
But tripped and fell in all his haste.

As the heart raced upon the ground...
It gave forth a plantive sound.
And it spoke in accents mild...
"Did you hurt yourself, my child."

I never heard or read the version liksted here.
professorlupinph Comment by: professorlupinph - 2007-09-18 03:45
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I'm an English teacher from Ateneo de Manila. Chris Chanco is right. You should take this poem down.
Comment by: - 2006-10-31 03:00
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Huy! Plagiarism yan. Nangongopya ka ha, poem yan ni Jose La Villa Tierra... Delete mo na yan bago pang may iba makakita niyan! Nag-filipino nalang ako para hindi ka mapahiya. Nakuha mo yan sa English Book mo no? Isang form yan ng pagnanakaw.
PBlakey Comment by: PBlakey - 2006-04-22 15:09
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The final verse brings out a bitter sweet comedy. I love the flow. I am not sure if i should be smiling as i read, but there is just something about it. Wonderful.
Comment by: - 2006-04-22 10:12
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That was so sad. I'm not sure if it is true, for I am not a mother and am not quite sure whether I want to be one. This poem doesn't encourage me to, as he killed his mom, but the love does. Great Work
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